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#163758 - 04/13/11 04:17 PM A poem
adodili Offline
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Loc: north east usa
I have loved,or not,
on this Earth
for centuries
it seems

it has
come
and
gone
with a flick
of mind.
or the mind of the
universe.
or the will
of a soul to pass
into the ether
to be of use somewhere else.

resigned.
I will not hunt
for love,
with neither a spear
or a cupids bow
and arrow.

I have not imagined
my entitlements
nor manifested them
with my thoughts,
as love for another
should be received as a gift.
given as a surprise from
the universe.
a reward for
all good deeds done.

maybe not.

II

ethos
arrived.
packaged
in the most undesireable
way.
wrapped in shreded
black ribbon
with a note, which read
i can never be yours.

together magik, not manifested
through incantation. lies at our feet
like a well loved dog.

effortlessly we call the wind

roses, fragrant,
bloom in winter snow.
lives are healed
with our together glances.
we are a gift wrapped in ribbons
of etherial glow.

III

promises
we made
to others.
who are still strangers
to our thoughts and souls

rote loving.

promises made.
promises believed
at the time they were made

promises.
man made.
flawed
the anti-christ
of love and
true accomplishment.

keep them or not.




a little light reading for this harsh Merc in retro
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#163810 - 04/28/11 01:08 AM Re: A poem [Re: adodili]
BlueDove Offline
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amen for "light" reading. swami

wow.

All I can seem to say at the moment is,
your words are truly deep and inspired.
I feel the meaning beyond them,
spoken and unspoken.

Thank you so much for sharing with us here.
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#163837 - 05/02/11 08:37 PM Re: A poem [Re: BlueDove]
adodili Offline
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Hello Blue Dove,

heartThat name, Blue Dove, so lyrical. Thank you for reading the poem, and commenting on it. I do hope that it was not an unhappy "wow". I write reams of poetry, shy blush, so I dont post often, especially when there are so few responses.
I want to thank you for responding, Blue Dove.

Blessings for your kindness
adodili

Make a wish wizard
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#163888 - 05/06/11 08:38 PM Re: A poem [Re: adodili]
BlueDove Offline
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Loc: Here
It was my pleasure to read, adodili. nod

It was not an unhappy 'wow' at all.
The imagery of your words
reached deep into an intimate part of
my soul....into a catharsis of Feeling and Remembrance.
It is a gifted writer who is able to do that
with merely a phrase.
I feel honored for your sharing.

As a writer (of sorts) myself,
I understand that it isn't an easy thing
to put yourself out there.
At times the writing is like a part of our Selves;
naked, hoping, vulnerable.
Most often the poetry we write
is from the deeper part of ourself
that doesn't always see the light of day.

I hope you'll share again sometime.
I would love to read more.

I'm making a wish. starplucker

wink thanks
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#163913 - 05/07/11 10:33 PM Re: A poem [Re: BlueDove]
Venus Offline
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Registered: 10/20/99
Posts: 1039
Loc: Massachusetts, USA
I enjoyed reading your poem too, Adodili. Please keep them coming. I love poetry and would love to read more of yours. Yours too Blue Dove. The both of you are very gifted with imagery.

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#164286 - 06/06/11 10:57 PM another poem [Re: adodili]
adodili Offline
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Loc: north east usa
Another Poem...tada... heartbeat

To The Father of My Joy

You
love
her, still.
I know,
you
said
it is
so
Please

Ride hell
borne waves of
lust
with her
when the moon
is low

love her body
with
all of
your need.
then sleep tight
and dream of
we

graze her.till
youve had your fill, and more
for glutonys sake.

if it is your will.

take her psyche
on a
ride with your
words.
rare and
ravishing.

dance with her
on angels breath.
draw rings around her beauty
with your
gift of halo bright.

Two:

does your
heart
hold mine
alone.
In
that one perfect
time
in
space
where love remembered
exists
beyond
eternitys light?

Three

Nexus: A Dream

your hand moved toward
mine
across
miles
of spice
scented roses
and thorns.
a hand, scratched
and bleeding
like
the christ.
torn
again.

Were you reaching
for our love,
as honest
as death and
splended to the core of sublime?

Your
hands
bloodied
with the magnificent
guilt of lady mcbeth

Love
needs no body to fulfill
its soul?

Sir,that just is not so.

humaness is our promise to god.

that is the
only promise
i will honor

all else
is a lie.


Hi guys,
hope you enjoyed this tidbit of harrowing unrequited love.

Sweet dreams Y'all
love
Adodili
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#164291 - 06/07/11 08:27 PM Re: another poem [Re: adodili]
Venus Offline
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Posts: 1039
Loc: Massachusetts, USA
Wow Adodili! That was pure, heart-wrenching awesomeness. And very therapeutic too, I bet. I especially love that second stanza. It really spoke to me. Thank you so much for sharing your deepest heart with us. I hope you'll share more of your poems soon.

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#164299 - 06/08/11 08:47 PM Re: another poem [Re: Venus]
adodili Offline
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Registered: 02/13/10
Posts: 109
Loc: north east usa
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Hi Venus,

glad it moved you..

thank you for your kindness

make a wish fairy

Adodili
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#164328 - 06/13/11 04:29 AM Re: another poem [Re: adodili]
Mysticknowflake Offline
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Registered: 06/12/11
Posts: 10
Loc: PA
applause
You are a true artist... loved reading your work.
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#164332 - 06/13/11 12:39 PM Re: another poem [Re: Mysticknowflake]
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Originally Posted By: Mysticknowflake
applause
You are a true artist... loved reading your work.



Yes Mysticknowflake, they truly are, aren't they.

knowflake WELL welcome to CE Mysticknowflake knowflake

Hope you en " JOY " your stay with US.
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#164343 - 06/14/11 12:02 AM Re: another poem [Re: SolaneStar]
Mysticknowflake Offline
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Thank You! Solane Star. I love the forum already.... rainbowheart
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#164352 - 06/14/11 07:51 PM Re: another poem [Re: Mysticknowflake]
adodili Offline
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Loc: north east usa
hi mysticknowflake

How kind of you to compliment my writing. Thank you so much. Welcome to the neighborhood thankyou

Uh oh
I may feel another poem coming on.....

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adodili
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#164382 - 06/17/11 03:01 AM Re: another poem [Re: adodili]
Mysticknowflake Offline
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Registered: 06/12/11
Posts: 10
Loc: PA
You are ever so welcome and thanks! for the welcome. rose


Edited by Mysticknowflake (06/17/11 03:09 AM)
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We are born at a given moment, in a given place and, like vintage years of wine, we have the qualities of the year and of the season of which we are born. Astrology does not lay claim to anything more. ~Carl Gustav Jung

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#164668 - 08/03/11 02:51 AM Re: A poem [Re: adodili]
Sharma78 Offline
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Registered: 06/22/11
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Loc: Kandana , Sri Lanka
Your ideas are great, love this poem
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