#164353 - 06/14/11 10:30 PM
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Covenant: I wear you like a stiletto self carved tattoo. across my breast. still bleeding. hidious in its appearance yet magnificent in its intent. glaring at the blood stained golden thread, angel sewn from my chest to yours, you turn away in disgust, dismissive of all that is graces invention Why? two: a violet thread of holy shroud binds us together as one. we are covenant made ... we are platos desire manifested in the flesh between a man and his rib. Plato so eloquently pleaded to love a man in every way but the sacred flesh of his true desire. his wish for himself. three: i wear you like a sullen note of miles' horn shuttering and dysphonic in its intent. meant to shock. drilling into undiscovered nerves yet buttery smooth, like the cognac that only god can taste. his sound, wearing our psyches short. human to the naked bone. man he sure loved that horn. My dearest soul of the universe i love you more. Good night my knowflake friends. I hope you enjoyed this bit of bizarre ranting of STILL unrequited love. I wish true love for each and everyone of you. Hoping they are with you right now, warming your souls with true loves' glow.  make a wish adodili
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#164354 - 06/15/11 12:13 AM
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Adodili, That was just Outright Astonishing My Dear, so Great.  Thank-You for sharing that with us ALL.  Love it. 
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#164360 - 06/15/11 04:47 PM
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#164405 - 06/19/11 06:07 PM
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#165505 - 11/10/11 10:03 AM
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 Shucks, ( drawing pictures in the sand with my toes ) I will send some more poems this way. Tonight the moon is full, and so will be my heart. I will write then. Love Adodili Make a wish Star 
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#165508 - 11/10/11 10:47 AM
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#165513 - 11/10/11 06:16 PM
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#165528 - 11/12/11 05:39 PM
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For Azul 1 poetry penned by a diminished heart is a bell cracked with hollow sound 2 Narcissus: You entered. Enthralled with knowledge of your earthly glory. " Tell me of my wonders" you said. And I did... I pulled you into the mind of my soul, and placed you there with reverent glow. Like a dove that nestles into its' lovers neck, you rested on my spirits' breast. and suckled till you had your fill. Gone. 3 Poetry written with an emptied heart is no poetry at all, It is a lament of loss and sorrow. For when Narcissus has drunk and drained the manna of a virgin heart, it may never fill to feed another deserving soul. 4 The Truth: It is love herself that loves eternal. Regardless of soul mind body spirit or vessel For she is infinite and divine and ours to hold for eternity. Hugs to you all, thanks for asking for more poetry. I will write some more soon, as my heart is as full as the moon. Love and blessings to all you knowflakes. Adodili
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#165532 - 11/13/11 03:00 AM
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#165540 - 11/13/11 07:27 PM
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 Veneo, Thank you my dearest knowflake. I feel another one coming on... uh oh... lol love adodili 
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#165545 - 11/13/11 11:53 PM
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As my heart is as full as the moonWELL, I'd say it's definitely as FULL as the moon. Upon reading your writings, I could FEEL your HEART BEAT and it so touches me DEEP-y to my SOUL  Thank-You for sharing your BE-auti- FULL poetry with US ALL adodili 
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#165567 - 11/15/11 05:16 PM
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 Thank you solane. I feel your love radiate everyday. For B We buried you today one sad shovel full at a time until your coffin was no longer visible to anyone but god. I see your face still young your eyes glowing with a story of love that only you knew. It was your secret. I always asked you, "tell me about love" is it real? You said, yes, you'll see. Today as my tears are without limit structure or intent. they are for you my dearest B. I want to tell you that i now know the secret. love is what it is without condition or expectation. I will remember your secret always as you will be in my memory forever. Good bye, my darling friend, mother in law, grandma to my brood. You will always be remembered with love. Love your Liz Adodili
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#165571 - 11/15/11 05:56 PM
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#165573 - 11/15/11 06:24 PM
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#165611 - 11/17/11 05:35 PM
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 Thank you for reading them, Venus. I am so happy you enjoy them
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#165754 - 12/02/11 11:51 AM
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Chapter 2 Willow forest culminates at state road 28. there i will build a farm stand made of old wood. brown and splintered where spiders laid their eggs and squirrels once chirped their love song to the earth. The travelers along this winding road on their way to and fro deep in plan for their hurriedworried lives will stop, and breathe the aroma of sweetness apples, cinnamon and the stars. in each buttery morsel will be my love and prayers for peace If they ask, I will tell them what I know about life, the forest and the trees and the Earth, and our lives at work and someday I hope to be known as that crazy lady on route 28 who makes magic pies and smiles and touches all who happen by. They will know for that five minutes that their eyes met mine and our mouths entwined in small, but elaborate conversation for that nano second of eternity they were so loved and understood. with love Adodili 
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#165769 - 12/04/11 10:22 PM
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#165775 - 12/05/11 12:03 PM
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 Shucks, ( drawing pictures in the sand with my toes ) I will send some more poems this way. Tonight the moon is full, and so will be my heart. I will write then. Love Adodili Make a wish Star I made a WISH Adodili too The invariable mark of a DREAM is to see it come TRUE.
Ralph Walo Emerson
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#165782 - 12/05/11 06:03 PM
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 Solane and Venus Solane, my dear friend, i can always count on you to cheer me up. You are so very kind. Venus, thank you for enjoying my rambles. You are so kind.  Love Adodili 
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#165808 - 12/07/11 07:00 PM
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